Painting critique 5

Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Fishing Lesson / Medium: Acrylic           Give Feedback
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Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Beware of dog!!! / Medium: Acrylic           Give Feedback
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Dave Tribe: I love humour in paintings – made me laugh.
Artist: Dave Tribe / Title: Honeywood Museum Carshalton Ponds / Medium: Oil           Give Feedback

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Barbara Stevens: You’ve captured the light really well, and I love the cyclists. I’m not sure about the lamp post – I think that it might be better without it.
Gina Grimwood: I like this picture a lot – especially the water with its gentle reflections -it’s just right. Not sure about the lamp-it’s probably something you’ll have to try out!
Margaret Eggleton: A good painting but a pity about the lamp post! Could you paint it out, David?
Dave Tribe: I appreciate your comments but still like the lamp post. Also, can’t remove it – would upset the dogs!
crit_maureenjones_Anthony Gormley on Margate old pier
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: Anthony Gormley on Margate old pier / Medium: Oil
Artist’s comments: My first summer with outdoor painting group I am sure they could be improved on.  Comments will be appreciated.
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crit_maureenjones_River Mole, Box Hill
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: River Mole, Box Hill / Medium: Oil
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Barbara Reilly: I am sure you have benefitted from your summer’s painting. You show confidence with colour and composition. I think you have worked hard!
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crit_maureenjones_River Wey, Ripley
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: River Wey, Ripley / Medium: Oil
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crit_maureenjones_Herstmonceux Castle
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: Herstmonceux Castle / Medium: Oil
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Dave Tribe: Good composition but water and reflections need revisiting.
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crit_maureenjones_Newlands Corner on a cloudy windy day
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: Newlands Corner on a cloudy windy day / Medium: Oil
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crit_maureenjones_Farncombe Boat House, Godalming
Artist: Maureen Jones / Title: Farncombe Boat House, Godalming / Medium: Oil
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crit_tonydevivo_I look at it this way
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: I look at it this way / Medium: Faber Castell pencils
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crit_tonydevivo_Chilled Polar. Could have done with this ice last week
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Chilled Polar. Could have done with this ice last week / Medium: Acrylic
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John Lucking: Your paintings of animals are always excellent, but I particularly like the background in this one. Very simple and very effective.
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crit_joycrouch_Morning Rain
Artist: Joy Crouch / Title: Morning Rain / Medium: Acrylic
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Dave Tribe: Nice composition and colours but lack of your usual detail makes it look unfinished – It that deliberate?
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crit_tonydevivo_Grizzly fishing
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Grizzly fishing / Medium: Acrylic with gloss medium
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Joy Crouch: You’re certainly embracing acrylic. I love the bear and the water.
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crit_tonydevivo_Grizzly about to go fishing
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Grizzly about to go fishing / Medium: Acrylic
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Barbara Stevens: Beautiful – very atmospheric.
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crit_georgefoxwell_Castle on the Loch
Artist: George Foxwell / Title: Castle on the Loch / Medium: Oil
Artist’s comments: I wanted to try a landscape and I wanted to do a big painting. Comments, however critical, are much appreciated.
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Barbara Stevens: What a lovely sunny painting. I think I would crop a bit off the right-hand side so that the castle isn’t dead centre, and I would tone the green on the left-hand side down a bit – make it a bit browner.
Gina Grimwood: This is a lovely subject & I agree with Barbara’s comments above -especially about the castle being dead centre. Even though the reflection is obviously a mirror image, I think it needs breaking up a bit as it goes towards the bottom of the picture-mainly the sky area.
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crit_tonydevivo_Boo!
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Boo! / Medium: Faber Castell pencils
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crit_tonydevivo_Boo again!
Artist: Tony Devivo / Title: Boo again! / Medium: Faber Castell pencils
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Dave Tribe: Works well but, half a face half the price?
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crit_barbarareilly_Peaceful Lane
Artist: Barbara Reilly / Title: Peaceful Lane / Medium: Oil
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Joy Crouch: I quite like the way the buildings are situated together. I don’t mind the car because your eye comes back into the picture with the help of the slanted roof. Maybe I would have opened the gate. All in all I like this painting.
George Foxwell: I really like it, I’ve no problem with the car.  Has anybody noticed the Alien looking out of the window?
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